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is not that funny, the animation isnt that good, and the flavor seems off. its quite a long piece, but in the end it feels like a ghettofied rip off of tomorrows nobodies with bad spelling.
Reviews for "MOAPAC - Episode 1"
RhysMus responds:
well of course you cant win them all :D
interesting humor lol
it was pretty good..id still like to see more cuz a few parts did make me laugh pretty good..like the black dude and the fly lol..keep it up guys:)
RhysMus responds:
we surely will!
omg...
damn..............that was so fucking funny hahaha the flash is definatly trophy material nice work man :)
RhysMus responds:
thanks guy :D
Kitsch!
Means bad artistic choice of comedy. I am not a fop when it comes to animation as long as it has pleasant color palette, non- stick figure, non screamer's, non- ass clown seizure festival circa 1977.
I understand it's a new series, lad lay da. But ergo for it to a success it got to be different. I saw you were trying to have random humour, stereotype humour.
But you come off being naif. Some of best humour happens when it is unexpected + when give social proof to someone. social proof is near impossible for you.
Here is ome possible improvements on humours, have only one character break the fourth wall talk straight to audience has to be unexpected look straight, freeze frame stuff like that. If you can do impersonations try using it as impersonations as famous people as narrator. my friend is magnificent with impersonations, his best are morgan freeman, Christopher walkin. You can say in a clip before you start narrating,"narrating will be done my Morgan freeman or whoever. If you want more possible idea just PM.
But whatever hopeful you keep working on quality before quantity.
RhysMus responds:
i dont want any of your ideas :S there silly :)
Really?
This flash was actually lame enough to motivate me to create an account and write a review. This is a blatant rip off of the "Tomorrow's Nobodies" series, except without the funny. Of course, the creators of the series cant take claim to the stereotypical black friend, talking cow, etc., but the similarities are obvious. The jokes were lame, the transitions were way overdone, and that is by far the worst attempt at drawing a rock I have ever seen, which is really hard to mess up :L. On a positive note, the music for the transitions was pretty good.
RhysMus responds:
this animation is nothing like tomorrows nobodies you silly girkin!