Interesting stuff
I like how the story was laid out, but it definitely seemed to progress slower due to a lapse in dialog by the characters. I thought the humor was definitely a 10 of 10, i got a big kick out of the whole thing. Aside from the cartoon antics, my friends and I get on in the same way. I think the last scene was great, too, though it's not what I expected. I thought it was going to involve the key somehow going down the wrong pipe.