That...
was so messed up that I was rendered speechless.
Reviews for "MOAPAC - Episode 1"
RhysMus responds:
haha horray!
this is a good show!
I could see this on like, tv or something...some of the jokes were a little on the side of lame, but I like obviously really weird stuff like that, so it was good! Keep it up!
RhysMus responds:
cheers man :D
Wowowwowow nice 1
Wow your like me
I respond to all my reviews as well :D
Great animation
Keep up the good work
Some really funny shit u got going there ;)
RhysMus responds:
maybe we are the same person, just at night i change to you in a split personality form :D
ugh
I can see the effort you put into this, but it doesn't cut it for me. Really... Because when you make an animation you have to put up some kind of storyline and a plotline. You had none of those. You probably made up things as you animated? I did that when I started, it's not a good thing to do. You will end up having no structure to it. Also try to stay away from such random humor, I'm fine with silly things and stuff but this was just too much.
"Hi I'm a cow I don't eat keys"
"okay well, let's do the wave guys"
"okay"
"Fuck there's aliens in my shoe"
"lol okay"
That's somewhat the sort of humor in this. It's really not funny, the ones thinking it is are either very young or very childish. Don't make your series fail like this, it'd be nice to see something new around here.
RhysMus responds:
i find this animation funny and i made it, i am 18 yet i am a childish person, i make animation for myself not anyone else because it makes me happy, no matter if anyone likes it, i always will :D
it was okay
this flash had some preaty good animation and the syn. mouths... but most of the jokes was preaty expected or just lame.... but then again there was a few times when you showed your quality when you put in some random stuff fx.. the giraf or the cow that beats him up^^ nwm try better with the story next time
RhysMus responds:
story story story haha, everyones saying that :P
as i said in my author comments "This is more of an introduction to the characters, there's still a story but not a very complex one"