Hmmm
Fairly good animation, but not enough here to really be outstanding. I'd suggest making the next chapters longer as well.
Reviews for "The Last Hour: Chapter 1"
Jaiba responds:
alright note taken. thanks for watching/reviewing.
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Too bad this is so short. I hoped to see a bit more. It's more of a trailer than a full chapter.
The graphics are decent. A bit sloppy here and there; especially the stars look quite bad, as some of them a lines, instead of dots.
The animation is decent, too. It's mostly tweening, but you made good use of that.
I think the music doesn't really fit here. Something more "spacey" would have been better.
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Jaiba responds:
this is the first chapter of the Last Hour series, you are in for a great ride if you continue watching the series. !!! Don't worry the other chapters will be twice as long as this! If you notice my newest chapters. the stars have been fixed in fact i think it looks beautiful. Go ahead and review the other chapters.
Short Chapter
I'd have preferred 'preview' or 'teaser' as the title of the flash, but if that's the way that you want to play it, fine.
I'd suggest that you get yourself a ghost writer, or at least a friend who can look over your writings for gramatical errors, just picking up on how much you wander about with the details on your introduction text. It should read at the front 'A Jaiba Production' or 'A Jaiba Productions Flash' for example.
As for the drawing, try zooming in a little and giving us better detail to the drawing of your spaceship - smaller tools and bigger zoom make the detail pick out a lot better and the result is much more professional and pleasing on the eye.
I'd also give the viewer an excuse to come back and watch the next part - show us things like what these mysterious Jaiba are. Show us some of the plot, without giving too much away and then you'll get people coming back to look at and hopefully be impressed with your work.
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Jaiba responds:
thanks but you should watch and review chapter 2 and 3 those get longer and better.
Meh.
I accidentally reviewed the other two chapters before I reviewed this one. My bad.
Animation/Graphics - Believe it or not the animation in my opinion was twice as good as part two and three. The other ones looked a lot like spam, but this one actually looked like there was some sort of effort put into them. The drawing and animation of the ship wasn't great, but it wasn't too bad either.
Story - Again, just like the other flashes of yours you make this nice descriptive story and in your flash it's nothing great at all. I mean it's only a ship flying from one side of the screen to the other. And then some sort of fade effect that almost made look like the ship was evaporating or something.
Audio - THANK YOU FOR THE LOVE OF GOD. I'm so happy that I didn't have to listen to those annoying voices again. I think there should be voices on the menu like that, but the ones that you include in your other flashes are so annoying that I preferred it without them. Music was fine like usual.
Overall, this one makes me think that the series isn't spam, but the other ones make me think that it is. I don't really know what to think.
C52
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Jaiba responds:
i'd like you to check out my newest movie, chapter 5. i think you'll really enjoy it. you'll see the great process from chapter 1 to 5. and you'll see this series definitely isn't spam. i hope you enjoy it, and thank you kind sir for reviewing.
Thats all
Well that was a surpise to me. Just a introduction and that was it .
Graphics. 4/10 This is hard to give, a score as its only very short and brief. All we get is a screen with a black background and text which looks fine. Then a short animation of a spaceship going towards a green planet?. This did not look to bad although the drawing ,are a little rough. Its so short as not to really ,not have any flash at all.
Sound. 6/10 Again with the only sound being the brief moment ,between the text and flash. It was not much and what i heard was okay, its to short to really tell for sure. It did have a science fiction feel to it not bad.
This looked like a promising series the background information, at the start was intruging, i was eagar to hear more. The style is exciting the scene ,looks like we are going to see a major good scene. Then the spaceship going towards the green thing it looked good. Space and the Anticrist, an interesting idea.
The major flaw is why this ending just as it began ,where is the action violence?, there is none. Why is this an opening episode? ,its way to short. The rating odd where is the violence?. I find it werid that this ended so soon ,the short movie which was barely was a movie is so off putting. How can we tell what this will be like?. I dont get why you ended this so suddenly. The spaceship then soon saying to be countined. This seems like a bad way ,to begin a series no offense.
Ovreall a promisng but very short movie made this hard to get the feel of it. Maybe add more to it.
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Jaiba responds:
thank you for your review, check out my other chapters you will see that it's all improving. thanks for watching.
-jaiba