Interesting premise...
But then the 1st chapter does NOTHING with it. That was WAY too short after giving so much back story. Make the chapters longer.
Reviews for "The Last Hour: Chapter 1"
There's really nothing here.
It's just some techno music and a shot of a spaceship moving. Exposition is not the same as story -- story is something we actually see happening. The Antichrist? Aliens? An unholy alliance? Humans? Earth? I didn't see any of those things, and they're apparently what your story is supposed to be about.
You'll get a better rating when you actually show some of the cool things you just put up text about. Any of them.
Jaiba responds:
Well the plot is just starting to develop.
...
... nothing against a christian based movie (on the contrary, being a christian I welcome them), but that was ridiculously short, pure and simple. And not particulary polished or well made. Give it a bit more effort before you submit a flash like that to the portal.
Jaiba responds:
Next one will be more interesting, the first chapter laid out the plot. Next one will most likely have voices!
What
UM what was that it was like a 50 second video you could of made it longer than that!
Jaiba responds:
check out chapter 10. it will more than make up for the quality of this movie.
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /457202