Cool story.
I think it has a damn good story, and most of the Voice cast is pretty damn good as well (as expected from the VAC lol).
But sometimes your animation seemed a bit.....lifeless. I think you need some more stuff going, as in more movement in the backgrounds, and you need to make your characters blink more often. The scene that I thought it was most noticeable in was, the classroom one I think.
Anyway, I am gonna go back and watch the others, and wait for the next. :D
WOAH
talking about confinement the series is good but the plot takes over the whole snerio ad the snerio takes the entire series the plot needs be more elaborative
Good but...
What seriously dissapointed me was that this is too much like a high school of sorts, rather than the military base it should be. I know the academics are important in the military, but where's all the training and discipline? You can't make any rank with grades alone. :/ .
Oh and your ep. 2... I really found the comment "that's a Corporal level technique" quite odd since you should be getting same training as the rest of your outfit unless you're special forces, but then the rest of your outfit would follow suit regardless...
I dunno just a heads up. I'd expect them to be training Spartans, not average teenagers.
Love the concept though. I'd used that concept for writing topics a coupla times. Really questions your morality and whatnot. The rest of your video was great though.
pritty cool
its was like watching anime
but it still felt amateurish over all
the drawings and animation could more defind lie hwen the girl was sitting down i noticed that her legs were out of porpotion.
the acting could have been more belivable.
and ambiance when they are talking
but i still thought it was good
not bad
i think the plot is overused but there r some good ones that come out every now and then. ur animation is getting better with everyone u do. well i dont think that matters cuz if they get a little better ur gonna hav me hooked. good luck man