Cool story.
I think it has a damn good story, and most of the Voice cast is pretty damn good as well (as expected from the VAC lol).
But sometimes your animation seemed a bit.....lifeless. I think you need some more stuff going, as in more movement in the backgrounds, and you need to make your characters blink more often. The scene that I thought it was most noticeable in was, the classroom one I think.
Anyway, I am gonna go back and watch the others, and wait for the next. :D
WOAH
talking about confinement the series is good but the plot takes over the whole snerio ad the snerio takes the entire series the plot needs be more elaborative
It's a good start
And I am referring to the composition, the plot is very good.
My first comment is on your consistency. I noticed that in some parts, you use great shading, background detail, etc., yet in others the buildings are just squares, and the characters are only outlined. You should find the time to put the kind of detail that you put into Cybil's face or the front of the school into the entire piece. I also noticed that when a character is talking from a profile view, his or her jaw moves, yet at no other time do you do this, making that movement seem very awkward. Try to stick to one style of animation.
My second comment is that some voices are not natural. Cybil's roommate (Aubrey? Audrey?) seemed to be narrating rather than seriously discussing the escape plans, and other characters such as the friends and teacher, in instances, did not really seem to put the emotion of the situation into their voices. Try practicing each section a bit before doing a final recording.
I commend you for the time put into this, good work!
Yeah!
Plz improve ur artwork! The story so far so good! I would love to see this in good artwork!
Good but...
What seriously dissapointed me was that this is too much like a high school of sorts, rather than the military base it should be. I know the academics are important in the military, but where's all the training and discipline? You can't make any rank with grades alone. :/ .
Oh and your ep. 2... I really found the comment "that's a Corporal level technique" quite odd since you should be getting same training as the rest of your outfit unless you're special forces, but then the rest of your outfit would follow suit regardless...
I dunno just a heads up. I'd expect them to be training Spartans, not average teenagers.
Love the concept though. I'd used that concept for writing topics a coupla times. Really questions your morality and whatnot. The rest of your video was great though.