ehh..
Still confusing, but at least theres something happening.
I notice the guy, Mr. Bluehairwhat'shisname, had emotion this time around, unlike the beginning of chapter 2.
Why didn't he dodge the Celia person's punch?
Reviews for "Base 17 ::03::"
dramatic
one of he things that shocked me was how dramatic everything was ha, i really like how the artist went out of their way to make everyone look and act different.
this is a pretty cool series
Bubbowrap responds:
Ha, yeah, didn't want anyone confusing characters with others. No two people are alike, and very few are similar in the real world, right?
Thanks, hope you like it more and more as it goes on!
Nice
The animation was quite good for something on NG. Glad to see that there were hardly any tweens, but for the love of god do some life drawing! It appears you have a firm concept of how to draw from anime, but if you practiced with drawing from life you could improve greatly so your art matches your animation.
Otherwise it was an enjoyable watch. It had a good atmosphere which immediately set the mood of the piece, and was executed very nicely and quietly. The blue haired guys acting left something to be disered, but the blonde girl was one of the better internet voice actors I've heard. This was a solid piece, and only staggered in a few places like art and some audio mixing where it was hard to hear the voices. Keep going, you have great potential and I look forward to your future work.
Bubbowrap responds:
I literally laughed at the first paragraph; I finish my figure drawing class on Tuesday, and I started the class well after I finished the Flash xD Just found it sort of ironic.
Thank you! Hopefully, I won't let you down!
plot needs work
good animation and good thought but the script needs to be better and maby make it longer
2... much... NARUTO SIMILARITY!!!
I mean... it may just be me (although i don't think so...) but you watched either too much naruto/bleach or other animes, but that "dramatic" part was waaay too much naruto/bleach... but anyways, good animation and the base story is good but the way its going right now its just predictably anime-ish