not bad
i think the plot is overused but there r some good ones that come out every now and then. ur animation is getting better with everyone u do. well i dont think that matters cuz if they get a little better ur gonna hav me hooked. good luck man
Reviews for "Base 17 ::03::"
Theres a secret character in this video.
Befor he got kidnaped i noticed L from death note walking bye :P
hmmm
not bad it was interesting i wouls like to see more
I Gave It a Try
I really tried to get into this, but "super soldier" plots are so old, bro. I always like to watch these sort of series when they get on the front page but I'm always disappointed. I even went back and watched the first two to try and dig it.
Your animation and overall drawing style got much better from the beginning of the series. The plot still seems a bit stale and all the background music seems stolen from Naruto (which I can't blame you for because decent flash-appropriate instrumental music is hard to come by)
The main character reminds me of what the guy who made the "How 2 Make a Newgrounds Flash" cartoon said... mysterious and who talks to himself.
No offense... it was a good try, but I guess it's just not for me. I'll keep watching to see if it gets better though. Good luck!
It's a good start
And I am referring to the composition, the plot is very good.
My first comment is on your consistency. I noticed that in some parts, you use great shading, background detail, etc., yet in others the buildings are just squares, and the characters are only outlined. You should find the time to put the kind of detail that you put into Cybil's face or the front of the school into the entire piece. I also noticed that when a character is talking from a profile view, his or her jaw moves, yet at no other time do you do this, making that movement seem very awkward. Try to stick to one style of animation.
My second comment is that some voices are not natural. Cybil's roommate (Aubrey? Audrey?) seemed to be narrating rather than seriously discussing the escape plans, and other characters such as the friends and teacher, in instances, did not really seem to put the emotion of the situation into their voices. Try practicing each section a bit before doing a final recording.
I commend you for the time put into this, good work!