That was awsome
But needs major improvement. You hit all my pet peeves it seems except for lack of storyline which i must say this story is fantastic.
Background music was way too loud at times, couldnt hear all that was said. And when you cut out the music all together when... damn forgot the names :/ the chick and... Prodigy were talking, there was no music at all. Its a serious scene and there should be some ominous music added to it. The piano is... ok but the chick is pissed off there not sad as the music makes one think the mood is. Theres alot of emotion in there that needs to be felt by the viewer through constant changing music. But soft and in the background.
Also, the quality of the art and animation shifted randomly from time to time. For example you put the end scene in a different perspective for awhile but the quality of Prodigy's figure looks... just weird. And some of the walking animation was just too stiff to look real. While the animation in the 1st and 2nd scenes were great, i think you may have dropped the frame rate in the last two. Got lazy towards the end?
Last thing, the voice acting wasn't so great with the redhead girl. Sounded like a robot... unless she IS a robot 0.o
I think this animation was great aside from these couple pet peeves. They're things that aren't really necessary t fix but they do take away from the story a little. You actually made me laugh a couple times. Plus the static poses were very dramatic and just good in general. The developing story reaches somewhat of a turning point here from what i can tell and you do a good job of presenting that. High five! And ill give you a nine too.