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Reviews for "[fishes]"

Brilliant

You managed to some up what life truly is but in an artistic, non-negative way. This is the way to show people. You have truly made something brilliant.

notorious responds:

thank you!

well

i respect you ideas and this was a wonderful peice your art is amazing but the concept behind it bothers me the idea theat monotony controls us just isent true
truth be told most of us do follow a routine most of us do lead bleak and meaningless lives but its because we choose to do so as humans we are free to do whatever we want as long as we can handle the concequences, it is purpose that drives the human mind, its is pupose that drives us to do what we do, we all have purpose, its just the question as to what that purpose is. regardless a woderful peice of animation. kudos freind

Ah Syncronicity, Our destinies are intertwined.

I give you a A for effort.

And you know, effort is all that really matters. Sure, You could Get caught up in semantics, like Style, Music, and presentation, But that doesn't really matter to much. You Made an effort.

Which is more than I can say, I cannot comment on your work as such because, I, Have not made such an effort. You went on the creative Limb and emerged with somthing that you wanted to express. I respect that. And thats what I score you on. You Kept a stiff upper lip and spoke your mind. Now reguardless of what I, Or anyone else has to say, Give Kudos to yourself, for finishing.

I enjoyed it very much.

Thank you.

10/10 ~ Oiaz

Nice piece of art

I dig the mixed media effect. Quite original. The only issue I had was that you originally referred to 9,999 other people and you = 10,000 and later refer to 9,999 other eyelids. Wouldn't it be 19998 eyelids? I guess that would screw up the poetry. Nice work! I encourage you to submit another piece in the future!

notorious responds:

wow good point lmao

i didn't notice that, but now that you mentioned it, yeah that wouldn't have the same effect

Loved it

The visuals are very sublimal and stuff the poetry is good and you are awesome.

notorious responds:

i am pretty nic