Reviews for [fishes]

[rik82vr]

That's sure worked for me...

"...is a collection of imagery, film and music to build an intense atmosphere..."
That's sure worked for me, I found it really immersive with many deep different feelings. I found it fantastic but like all the art work this depend a lot on the person is watching, for some other this cold mean nothing.

Why don't you show your work in some short film competition or festival I'm sure you've some good chance, I'm not speaking about the technical part but for wich concern the artistic part, that in my opinion is very good, i'm say good not like thing you can find usually on the net but like a professional work.

Just some advice that I think could improve the movie...
1- Put a "Play" and a "Pause" button.
2- Increase the volume of the music, it's my pc or is very very low.
3- Use some more soft-edge fonts for the writing or better different ones that match with a particular part of the movie, this would improve a lot the feeling expressing of the writings.
4- Some time the animation on the background have too much bright and contrast, I know that that is the effect that you would obtain but sometime it's hard to see even something.

notorious responds:

Thanks, what I really plan on doing is moving away from the internet more to a film-fest like environment.

The volume on the music, especially near the end is actually quite loud. It might be your PC.

Thanks for the helpful review, i take note of all of this kind of stuff.

[Gimgak]

Perfect

This is the kind of thing i've been waiting newgrounds to have. It's really good. I hope you make a full film!

notorious responds:

I'm thinkin about the full film right now. Thanks for the good review!

[kakashi-v2]

great movie

this is the kind of movie you hate too admit is true but you know deep down that it is, regardless one of the most intriguing movies i've ever seen 5'd

notorious responds:

thankssss

[Skaves]

Well done!

This was VERY well done. The music most definately set the tone for it and fit it to a T. Also, the animation was very nice; crude in some parts, and nice and clean looking in others, giving it an all-round great look. Nice blending of animation with video capture as well.

One note on constructive criticism would just be to try and spice up the text. You put many transitions in, but the text still seemed bland, though very powerful in its meaning.

[polyrhythmm]

I gave you a 10/10

even though i know all of your animation is just video footage traced.
You dont see this kinda stuff on newgrounds and you dont see this kind of art anywhere.

Props to you.

This is real art - a rare thing that usually gets overlooked, the imposter of common art blocks the sun like an eclipse.

See I can be arty too :)