Very artistic and conceptual
This is quite a change from stuffs we usually saw on Newgrounds. The concept may not be exactly new but you put effort and time into making this and I can see the meaning this flash tries to express. I've watched your previous works before and I think they're amazing for being made by someone at your age. I hope more people can appreciate this kind of flash movie.
thanks and a surprising number of people do appreciate it!
Excellent
Life in a nutshell....
<3 I loved it
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Beautiful.
Beautiful and thought provoking...
hey old friend
Lovely
Your flash was very interesting, but unfortunately I felt it a litle too predictable. So much has allready been said about the mundane lifestyle of the human race, and most of it by the people that don't have the courage to break out from their ordinary routine. I do not mean this as an insult to you or anyone else who share simular feelings of being another cog in the ticking clock of life, as I assume that as the poem suggests you are still in high school, meaning that you have little or no control over the situation and are deffinately more inclined to feel unimportant or insignificant. Any way back to the flash, I really enjoyed the juxtoposition of video, flash, and poetry and I thought all three were edited very nicely and effectively portrayed what you wanted to say. The poetry could have been a little stronger, I would recomend some stronger vocabulary and analogies. I would also recomend poets such as Richard Siken or Saul Williams, both of which have great tone and rythem added to their poetry. I would like to see a sequal maybe once you get into college, or not, just to see if your oppinion of the world has changed, and again after you graduate and eneter the working world, or not, just to see if there is any further developement on your thoughts on life. Lastly I would recomend reading some philosophy such as Plato's "allegory of the cave", or Heideggars theory on feild relationships. Good luck to you my friend. 5/5 & 10/10
oi take a journey like this everyday
the only thing that was missing at the end was: "maybe 3 minutes for us... is a lifetime for the next higher species" ... life is a crazy cycle... it spins around everything and itself