Well...
Not so bad, but the annoying thing is the overlapping music when the scene changes. Also when Luigi jumps in the first scene, you should make that more smoothly and faster. Guess you should work on that.
Reviews for "the luigi chronicals ep.1"
zombiesurfer responds:
yeah this was pretty rushed, ill do better next time
hmm
It was alright, it DID have sound effects, but theres a huge gap for improvement, and yeah the humor fucking sucked.
terrible
To be honest, this is some of the worst animation I have ever seen. It was absolutely terrible. The jokes and the "storyline" was also really bad. ALL the graphics were taken from Nintendo, and all you had to do was to tween an image of Luigi around on the screen. You didnt even put in sound effects. Take some months off and practise on your animation and drawing.
zombiesurfer responds:
theres nothing wrong with using nintendo sprites
That's it.
Alright. I'm going to introduce my new policy: If the creator of any animation can't be bothered to fix minor typos in their own work on a regular basis ("chronicals", "minuites", etc.) before posting them for the world to see and judge, I'm gonna start detracting points.
That said, let me just...well..suggest something. I've said it once. I'll say it again. The "(video game character) dies in funny ways" thing has been done. Over and over. To the point where even the forms of death are becoming predictable. I'm not asking for an Oscar-winning film here, folks. Just something new for once.
Good effort, keep trying.
zombiesurfer responds:
ill take your advise