could be better
it's not a bad start but it could use some work
spelling errors were abundant (not saying my english is perfect :P)
animations could be a bit smoother too
and the jokes were a bit lame
but keep up the good work and you will get there someday :)
potential
I see potential in this (hence the titel) but you'll need to polish your skills some more. there's also a huge typo in there: when Luigi is riding the bomb and the screen comes up saying "five minutes later" you typed "minuites". But anyhow, I liked it and I really hope there's gonna be more.
big tip
dude read this please its pretty important
i started sprites, and I can already see the mistakes you made that I had done
1-to fix the blurryness of the sprites, directly import the sprite sheet into the lbirary (file, Import)
2-luigi running is 3 frames, the one you are missing is when he is in a normal poistion i think
3-make sure luigi is touching the ground, sometimes he was off and it really spoils it
good job on the sound, and try worknig on the moving background (i personally have no idea how it works)
ehh
you did great for your first sprite flash luigi was blury you might wanna spend more than 3-4 days try spending a week or two but you did well i gave you a three out of five.
thanks :-)
Hmmm
Like everyone else said... you need to create better jokes... some spelling errors like minuites..it is spelled minutes. I think making a good sprite movie is very hard! I am actually trying right now :D. This was your first sprite movie, right? It was good but there are a couple of things to be corrected.
One more thing.... the last level when luigi is runin in the castle... those animations seemed to be made in 3 sec. put some more effort in them next time! Keep up!
i know i need better jokes, thanks for the review