Is this your first flash?
It's OK For a first flash, Much better then many other senseless sprite movies actually.
Reviews for "the luigi chronicals ep.1"
Not that bad.
You don't have bad ideas, you just need to improve on a few things:
1- Try to make the characters walk straight on the ground, because sometimes it looks like they are kind of floating.
2- Try to make the animations a little more realistic and smooth. Getting the hang of timing and speed is a must.
3- Make different camera angles. Things like zooms and such can improve the flash a lot.
4- Be careful when you use sprites because you tend to stretch them more than necesary, thus making then look unnatural.
5- Be careful where you place the sprites. Make sure they are all in place and that they look good.
6- Practice, practice, practice. Just try different methods and framespeeds, different speeds betwen the sprites in the movie clips.
With this you can do something decent =)
Hmm
The animation itself was good, you are good at spriting and I can tell that you would be even better if you practice a lot, but as for the actual toon, parts of it moved a bit too slow, and if it was supposed to be funny it wasn't, so I'd say to keep up sprite animation, just improve on the actual toon itself.
Need to work on your animation...
Seriously the movie felt choppy and slow.
There wasn't much camera action, might wanna try zooming from time to time?
Work on your jokes seriously. This was not funny.
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not really funny
zombiesurfer responds:
i know, but oh well