It was ok.
Well beacuse its your first flash, its great. But you should have zoomed into luigi cuz he is the main character, i barely saw him. Sound effects were 'm kay, good job with em. You should have put more jokes, a good flash never is made in 3-4 days or something. At least by what i saw
And guys, dont be harsh on him, its his first sprite movie. Good luck on improving! ;)
will do
For One of Your Firsts....
I am a HUGE Mario Bros. fan, thus I was interested in watching your sprite. I think it was the first joke that I enjoyed. The jokes, as the others said, need a little work, but all-in-all, for being one of your firsts, it was pretty good (TRUST ME, I have seen MUCH WORSE!). :D Don't get discougaged. If you wanna' see a REALLY funny flash about Mario (although I am COMPLETELY Pro-Luigi), you should watch "Dumass Mario" (I think that they spelled dumb like that...). Cheers, mate!
~Captain Kirk (aka: Lucky-Duck)
big tip
dude read this please its pretty important
i started sprites, and I can already see the mistakes you made that I had done
1-to fix the blurryness of the sprites, directly import the sprite sheet into the lbirary (file, Import)
2-luigi running is 3 frames, the one you are missing is when he is in a normal poistion i think
3-make sure luigi is touching the ground, sometimes he was off and it really spoils it
good job on the sound, and try worknig on the moving background (i personally have no idea how it works)
potential
I see potential in this (hence the titel) but you'll need to polish your skills some more. there's also a huge typo in there: when Luigi is riding the bomb and the screen comes up saying "five minutes later" you typed "minuites". But anyhow, I liked it and I really hope there's gonna be more.
hmm
It was alright, it DID have sound effects, but theres a huge gap for improvement, and yeah the humor fucking sucked.