Wow...
Okay here goes, the plotline of your story was practically borderline shit, the spoofs of clocks and the spoofs of dbz have long since been stretched and pulled to the infinite regions of creativity, mixing the 2 together doesn't make it any better. Your animation couldn't have lacked anymore detail, and sorry, not even good music can save this flash, nice try though, "oh this flash sux, insert good music here." Put more work into the next one please, and maybe just maybe come up with something original and I'll give you a review of applaud.