No, we do not use drugs while making flash.
M'kay, the best part of this flash was the loading screen, trust me. For me to more easily explain your "skills", i shall bullet them:
Graphics: Your grpahics were poorly animated, i did not understand why Luigi lived in a rock, he lives with Mario. Their were absolutely none or very few facial expressions, if you took the time to put some work into several frames to make this possible, you would be suprised at how this would be number one.
I'm not sure why you did this, and in fact one of the largest flash problems occuring currently is that you were abusing the tween ability, do no get me wrond, tweening is great, but when you overdose on this facter you get bad fight scenes.
Style: How dare you mix Mario, DBZ and the clocks! What were you aiming for here? If you plan on having DBZ in your movie you were to have some damn good fight scenes which was in words-- "overlooked", and if you plan on having clocks in your movie you know you ruin it right their and then. I'm not sure why their was so much transforming but whatever, your flash. What is with the neglect of plot signifigence??? You rushed this movie, it had a chance of being a series, not a rush-a-round brand montage escapade.
Sound: Your down right lazy if you plan on "just" ripping songs from your little iTunes(Tm), and the songs were extremely unfit for this type of flash, it's Mario, not some adult violence and disturbed kind of flash.
Violence: The only reason this was rated thirteen is for little vulgar laguage, nothing more, their was cheaply and or no blood throughout most of this, and when you mess with a fixed-camera angle TOO MUCH it ends up were as nobody knows what had happened.
Interactivity: I repeat, it would of worked as a series, but you rushed this around and because of that, it left of serious case of minor plot signifigence. Do you really think half of the audience understood what was happeing? You neglect facial expressions and time to chat with your enemy before a maniacal Mario goes into a brutality rush.
Humor: If this was suppose to be funny because it included clocks and DBZ concepts and repetative plot twists, you are a very confused child. I was angered by the fact of you insulting groups such as the clocks or even DBZ.
Overall: You abused tweening, you need an english tutor, neglect of facial expressions, no plot signifigence, misuse of concept, too much rushing, no moral value what-so-ever. Abuse of twists,
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I highly doubt this took you 25 whole months to make this!
Either you spent half an hour every other week or just used it as a stunt to rake in attention and sympathy! You have a level 13 Negrounds(Tm) account and i expected much better from somebody with skills! Matt (Krinkels) Jolly said he spent on average 6 months for each of his LEGENDARY Madness episodes in which much better than this and if averaged into a 25 month period, it comes out to be longer than this and also much better.
I hate liars and i show you know sympathy! Maybe next time if you TRULY want to be a Newgrounds(Tm) legend, i suppose you try.
--Adamiscus
