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Reviews for "Mario's Revenge: SE"

Wow...

Okay here goes, the plotline of your story was practically borderline shit, the spoofs of clocks and the spoofs of dbz have long since been stretched and pulled to the infinite regions of creativity, mixing the 2 together doesn't make it any better. Your animation couldn't have lacked anymore detail, and sorry, not even good music can save this flash, nice try though, "oh this flash sux, insert good music here." Put more work into the next one please, and maybe just maybe come up with something original and I'll give you a review of applaud.

No, we do not use drugs while making flash.

M'kay, the best part of this flash was the loading screen, trust me. For me to more easily explain your "skills", i shall bullet them:

Graphics: Your grpahics were poorly animated, i did not understand why Luigi lived in a rock, he lives with Mario. Their were absolutely none or very few facial expressions, if you took the time to put some work into several frames to make this possible, you would be suprised at how this would be number one.
I'm not sure why you did this, and in fact one of the largest flash problems occuring currently is that you were abusing the tween ability, do no get me wrond, tweening is great, but when you overdose on this facter you get bad fight scenes.

Style: How dare you mix Mario, DBZ and the clocks! What were you aiming for here? If you plan on having DBZ in your movie you were to have some damn good fight scenes which was in words-- "overlooked", and if you plan on having clocks in your movie you know you ruin it right their and then. I'm not sure why their was so much transforming but whatever, your flash. What is with the neglect of plot signifigence??? You rushed this movie, it had a chance of being a series, not a rush-a-round brand montage escapade.

Sound: Your down right lazy if you plan on "just" ripping songs from your little iTunes(Tm), and the songs were extremely unfit for this type of flash, it's Mario, not some adult violence and disturbed kind of flash.

Violence: The only reason this was rated thirteen is for little vulgar laguage, nothing more, their was cheaply and or no blood throughout most of this, and when you mess with a fixed-camera angle TOO MUCH it ends up were as nobody knows what had happened.

Interactivity: I repeat, it would of worked as a series, but you rushed this around and because of that, it left of serious case of minor plot signifigence. Do you really think half of the audience understood what was happeing? You neglect facial expressions and time to chat with your enemy before a maniacal Mario goes into a brutality rush.

Humor: If this was suppose to be funny because it included clocks and DBZ concepts and repetative plot twists, you are a very confused child. I was angered by the fact of you insulting groups such as the clocks or even DBZ.

Overall: You abused tweening, you need an english tutor, neglect of facial expressions, no plot signifigence, misuse of concept, too much rushing, no moral value what-so-ever. Abuse of twists,
et cetera. --
I highly doubt this took you 25 whole months to make this!
Either you spent half an hour every other week or just used it as a stunt to rake in attention and sympathy! You have a level 13 Negrounds(Tm) account and i expected much better from somebody with skills! Matt (Krinkels) Jolly said he spent on average 6 months for each of his LEGENDARY Madness episodes in which much better than this and if averaged into a 25 month period, it comes out to be longer than this and also much better.
I hate liars and i show you know sympathy! Maybe next time if you TRULY want to be a Newgrounds(Tm) legend, i suppose you try.
--Adamiscus

mari... oh...

you should mention nine inch nails in the credits, since you used 'just like you imagined' in the opening.
you know, i think this is an amazing creation. the music selection is phenomonal, the action is well directed, and the timing of the subtle humor was excellent.
but i hate, hate hate HATE how often I've seen Mario paradied. I've seen so many, I just can't be entertained by them anymore. aren't there enough on Newgrounds? i think i've watched about 10 flashes all the way through having to do with Mario, or Luigi, or Sonic, or some other famous video game character, 'seeking revenge,' and having endless fight scenes with classic villains. these characters are unoriginal. the plot is unoriginal. use your powers for good, not evil.

OK really...

I really didn't think this was very good, I didn't watch it all, but when you had, things turning into the strawberry clocks and w/e.... It just got f--k up. It would be funny, but you making this so serious and stuff, it really made this thing look bad....

sorry... and plus, with all the effort, ehhhhh... I don't want to think about it

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meh

that was really horrible. But don't take my word for it, look at all the other guys mad that you wanted to put a bunch of music to bad mario clips. Congrats!