ZOMG!
What the hell? were you high when you made this?
luigi and mario are clocks? nonononononononono NO!
And why did mario-fuck mushroom clock suddenly get orochimaru powers? honestly, it looked promising in the begining, but i cant believe I sat through 14 minuits of that! GOD 0-0
*sigh*
I really tried to like this, I really did, since you spent so much time on it, But no. What makes you think that quantity rules over quality? The story itself was crap, Some of the things you put in there has already been done too many fucking times! I couldn't even bear to sit and watch the whole damn thing you call a "movie", when you make a movie or write a book, you have to keep the people interested in it, don't be afraid to show it around a bit, give people a sneak peak and if they don't like it, make some changes. Don't just show it to your friends, parents, forum friends, etc. Because you are showing this movie to complete strangers with different tastes, But don't let that stop you from putting stuff you were wanting to put in there, But as I said before, make some changes to the movie, Toss away old stuff and parts that just seem like crap. I know that the script isn't meant to be taken seriously, But that doesn't mean it has to suck. You have a fuckload of potential (Honestly who doesn't?) The Graphics were alright, considering it is fourteen minutes long, But the story itself just sucked, when you dive into your next project remember to edit, A guy could make a movie in a few months but spend a year and a half editing it, taking out old scenes from the movie, and putting new stuff in. I'm not trying to make you "see the light" or any of that bullshit, But before you submit a movie, ask yourself "Will people like my movie because of this? Or because I put *insert character here* and *insert group of people here*?" Graphics won't make the movie better if the story just looks like it was slapped together at the last minute. I'm done now.
Bad spelling...
...gets an automatic blam. I spent more time watching the "preloader" than I did on the movie itself, but I just couldn't make myself sit through those speech balloons. Sorry.
CRAP
Dude really that was not original in any way shape or form, the whole clock thing kind of threw me off but then the DBZ thing not clever. I will give you credit on the length that could not have been easy to do, BUT I would have rather seen a 3 minuet video that was good then a 14 minute video that was crap. QUALITY OVER QUANTITY.
abysmal.
Plot: probably the dumbest thing (not in a good way) ever since it did not make sense at all, anti clock movies had some kind of effect 5 years ago when they still made movies, voice actors are pretty much a must nowadays too, since the text was all too fast or too slow
Graphics: VERY basic, does not look good at all
Sound: song fades in, song fades out
Animation: tweens can look really good, yours didn't, really, really weak
Interactivity: pretty good preloader but the menu interface is terrible, when i clicked the extras menu and the development story, the back button came at the same place as your link button so it couldnt go back and i was sent to that site.
stick to making flash tutorials, they are awesome and helped me out when i was learning flash, this was shit
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tcm