Not that great.
I stopped looking after the second Clock appeared. Not only was it 14 mb,but it also lacked creativity. Cause its all based on things that already has been Created. Super mario 64,Clocks,Dragonball Z etc. Too long loading time,too many clocks,too litlle creativity.
Sorry i didnt enjoy this.
Never Again!
Please, never, ever, EVER! Make another Mario Parody, I think you just ruined one of my favorite snez characters. 1st of all you used way to much music in such small scenes. You tryed way too hard to create emotion between the scenes, then it just got really pathetic, with those clocks, i think you lost complete sight of comedy and the topic of Mario. I mean dont get me rong, some of it was pretty ok, like the part when the 3 clocks merged intoa jam jar and mario into a mushroom, but it went way too far with that stuff.
Another thing that was kind of annoying was how many times the characters kept transforming, and the DBZ thing was just plain shite, the hair didnt suit Mario, and when i thought that was enough, the fruit started to grow hair, i mean thats just plain crap. I think Mario must have transformed at least 4 or 5 times, its enough after the 2nd one.
So please, PLEASE, never ever make another flash like that again, make shorter random ones next time with less music and drama queen acts.
haha, you got a small penis
seriously...
Seriously why does such junk pass as good enough to warrant so many 5's to get number 1?
While the illustrations looked nice (were drawn rather than sprites), the animation was clunky and felt robotic. The sound? Wait... there really wasn't anything new... THis is JUST ANOTHER MARIO MOVIE WITH POP/ROCK MUSIC playing in the background as a sorry attempt to accentuate the onscreen action. As well, it's allready using the boring story sequence of, dullsville with a fight in the middle. This has been done to DEATH here on newgrounds. I couldn't bear to watch it anymore once strawberry clock showed up. Your movie has a) nothing original to add to the community here. b) nothing in terms of plot (kirby makes an apperance to say 'hi'. Why should i care about this character that you have in your story??) and c) albeit the lack of thought you put into development, you did draw it by hand and i do commend you for that, as you didn't use sprites. Perhaps you should work with a freind or someone else to handle your animation and story/plot details, or you can work on refining those arts yourself to make your next submission better.
FINAL VERDICT: 2/5
...says the guy that doesn't know how how to do flash
Cheesy!
BAD:
1) I dont understand how you could make Mario/Luigi a clock!
2 You mixed 4 different things in here... (kirby,Mario,Dragonball and the Clockcrew)
3)The lines were totally CHEESY! ( Kirby comes to a random spot where Mario is and just askes him if he could take him home),( I will make him pay, and on and on)
4) You coverd the back button with your homepage URL
GOOD:
1) Animation
2) Music
Pretty bad..
Seriously dude, that was just a bunch of random crap thrown together to make a semi-decent flash movie.
Pros:-It had Mario
-It was hand drawn
Cons:-It was too repetative
-It was moving from plot to plot way too fast
-Way too corny
-Learn to spell.
Follow the criticism.. your lucky this was front page.