nice
but, do you need voice actors? id be happy to oblidge
my aim is in my profile, if youre interested, send me an IM
Reviews for "StarCraft: Alliance"
LogFish responds:
Thanks for the offer, but I'm just going to be using New Zealanders for this :) More than just me, too, next episode... probably.
Excellent graphics work
Your drawing in this was very good and very accurate to Starcraft.
However, the fact that everyone had the same voice, and that every single shot of someone talking was a panning shot, got repetative and annoying.
Instead of just panning the camera every single time, make them do something in the shot. And get some sound editing software like Soundforge to edit your voice and give each character a different voice.
Great animation, almost perfect
I liked the animation style of this cartoon, and the dialogue was good too, but my one complaint is (and I'm sure you know this already) that you need more voice-actors to help in the final productions. It's not that your voice sounds bad, it's just that the pitch of some of the characters sounds the same.
Woot. Three times the StarCraft!
I have watched the third one... and i'm really liking it. This really showed a plot-coming. This really isn't just about fighting, but also a good story. I'd love to see the future episodes.
Maybe a bit more action could have been involved, though. Still, that aside, you still get a good grade in my book - An 8. Good job.
Your fellow StarCraftian, Catis.
LogFish responds:
Cheers! Ep 4. is chugging along nicely, close to the end now - it's going to be enormous though, like 7-8 meg maybe and 12 minutes long, so I don't know whether NG will take it! Perhaps I put one too many scenes in it... mm. I don't animate action most of the time because I am a lazy bastard, I'm working on that, heh.
that was nice
that was a nice animation i only beg of u next time not to make it tha long, break it up into 2 epesodes. as a star craft lover i fully enjoyed that but again far to long
now to the animtaion, the animation was clean, and well drawn, i lovd the originality of the drawings, the talking scenes where goood and the paning was done to perfection. loved the soften fill edge eyes that was nice, the style was different but also very well drawn, i thought the hand to hand combat could of been improved and the camera angled changed to much but only in the hand to hand. the voice acting was done brilliantly, until towards the end but the clarity and script was brilliant, the variance in the different voices could of been involved, did u do all the voices yourself? if so you did a really really good job. you must make more and this was a brilliant flash
well done and keep up the good work
LogFish responds:
Thanks! Yea I did all the voices, I'm meaning to get a voice actor for the next one, so there'll be a bit more variety. I agree the fight at the start is kinda ... quick and choppy, I'm working on ironing out that kind of thing in the next episode, bring in another level of professionalism to it.