Reviews for Black Knights episode 4

[Areth]

Horriable "japan meets medieval europe" theme.

I gave you a 8 because I have my own personal problems with this series of yours. I'm a true blue fan of the old style that knights of any cask do not use oriential weapons. So thats means no katana's. But you gave a excuse for that in one of you're past episodes, claiming we would find out why later. I let it slide.

But now you have a country, that is obviously based in a lot of ways to medieval europe fantasy settings, and you named in "The land of the rising sun" I felt like strangling you personally after they said that. God. It just irratates me to no end. Also evern the wizards have oritiental names...wizards like that did not exist in any oriential setting. Even fantasy. It breaks all the rules of fantasy settings and stories. I feel like slapping you the more I see the mixture.

Other then the stuff I have problems with its a good flash. The sound has been fixed from previous episodes so there voices can be heard over the music, the graphics are very good considering you said you drew most of it with a mouse, and the style flows very well, (apart from the freakin katana samurai stance a "Black knight" takes. *spits*) and the violence is kept at a good level with not going overboard.

So yeah 8/10....stinking theme...

[blinkboy211]

Amazing

The artwork and story was just amazing. The only thing is i sort of forgot about what happened in the last episode but it came to me after i say Malgent. I sort of dont want to see Malgent die i would like to see him do some more damage.

[DasModel]

Pace needs work

Your artistic style is very good, and the story is pretty good, but there is something wrong with the pace. I find myself saying that a lot (maybe I just have ADD), but it seems to be what stops at least 90% of submissions with this much work put into them from becomming masterpieces. This series seems to drag on in parts. Even during battle scenes I felt a lack of suspense. It is clear that you are a great artist and a good storyteller, but I think you need to find a way to condense your work. Without cutting a single original frame or line of dialogue, I think you could have cut the length of this series in half. I'm not saying it's always a good thing to cut time, and it's usually not a good thing to cut content, but there are many cases where less is more. This probably still should have been the daily submission though. Keep up the good work.

[Neo-Seiryu]

short but almost perfect

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[DarkZero45]

nice

in the last episode the generals sword got cut in half. in this one, before he fights malagent i noticed that the generals sword still has a whole and undamaged blade. just wanted to know why that was.