I want to like it, I really do ..
Nonsensical scant plot lines, worst voice acting I've ever heard, too much white noise during action scenes, 'knights' in an 'anime-style' flash where they use friggen samurai swords .. these are the things that downright ruin your VERY WELL MADE movies which I am positive you put a crapload of effort into.
It's these small aesthetic things that really destract from your work and make it barely tolerable for me and most of my mates. I want to like it, I really, really do, I can see how much effort you put into these things. The whole japanese style of animation with 'knights' and katana's is pretty shit, but .. bring the plot more into play, ease up on the whitenoise sounds and for gods sakes, get less horrid voice actors.
The stereotypical American voice actor is bad enough, but having one with a valleygirl drawl you can't understand unless you're a seppo is very horrible; worse still is the fact they're obviously trying to talk all husky and deep and instead sound like cheap porn stars. I hope to see more of your stuff though, chin up!