Well that sucked
Needs some serious work, first off, i know your workin on it, but the vegeta fight is broken. second off, they have 4 levels of super saiyan, if gokus gonna get into a big fight, odds are, hed at least use one of em, you gotta think a little more in charector like that. Lastly dear god that was soooooooo boring, then when it looks like there MIGHT be something happening, it cuts off.
The Vegeta fight part is fixed, look again if you wanna. And well I just don't want em to go all out at the start, they'll drag the fight. The second episode was supposed to start with the end of first one and just when the beam was going to hit em they turn SSJ!
Eh.
The premise/plot was good, but your grammar, scripting, and animation suck.
Um... just wondering...
If you've had 1or 2 other flashes in the past, how can this one be your first??
This is the first one that I think isin't 100% crap xD
Boring...
But you did stick true to DBZ that instead of fighting they talk too d@mn much! Sprites isn't a good way to show off DBZ, looks like you ripped most of it off from a Gameboy game. Try harder next time, spell check everything before you put it up too, there were many grammatical errors. It was okay, but there was just too much talking, it needs to be cut down a lot, and you need some kind of graphic skill to show how their martial art skills look instead of the same repetition over and over again. Better luck next time.
Yeah well I just did it in a rush too... I'll do better next time ;)
yawn
Last time I checked dbz was about martial arts and fighting. It was torture to have to sit through two sprites spitting word bubbles back and forth. If you refuse to add voices then at least cut the chat scene down quite significantly.