Well...
It is a bit boring, the plot was a bit well.....boring, and the ehh music was a bit.....boring, however it isn't all that bad, just 1 thing, why did goku and vegeta attacked that kid after having a friendly conversation with him, they should be arrested for assaulting a child, even though that child is stronger than them
Hmm yeah xD but still ya know GOku always trying to be nice and stuff... So is the new character called "Aikado" he's not a big fighting fan itself but he does what he's asked to do. And yeah meybe there's 1 good reason why they attack... THE KIDO DESTROYED THE WHOLE DOWN! xD
Some criticisms
Just being honest.
One, it sounded like your music was overlapping with each other which made it sound bad in a few places.
Two, typos! Lots of 'em.
Three, I find the reading was hard to read from time to time when the same person was talking longer then two lines length.
The movie was a short and had more reading then watching of any animation.
Uhuh I'll fix the music now (Opens Flash) and typos...Yeah too lazy to fix them in this version I'll make sure I won't make this much typos in episode 2!
Cool!
I like this! Awesome flash, just as good as any DBZ episode on TV! I can't wait to see what happens next, so hurry up on part 2!
I'll get on it on monday!
good good
Good flash all around some spelling mistakes that have to be fixed. And theres no way that Vegeta is stronger than Goku. Goku ROCKS!!!.
Well there is a way that Vegeta is stronger... Actualy I started to make flash video becose I got sick and tired of seeing that Vegeta get owned by Goku all the time. It's time that tables will turn xD Anyway I won't Goku look like a whimp or anything I just wanna make a flash where Vegeta finaly beats Kakarot! I still hope you'll watch other episodes!
This was OK, but the music overlaps.
The music is a major issues in the flash. Fix that and the grammar, and this will be one sweet-ass movie.
Yeah I'll fix the music and ummm I'll look at my grammar in next episode!