Some criticisms
Just being honest.
One, it sounded like your music was overlapping with each other which made it sound bad in a few places.
Two, typos! Lots of 'em.
Three, I find the reading was hard to read from time to time when the same person was talking longer then two lines length.
The movie was a short and had more reading then watching of any animation.
Uhuh I'll fix the music now (Opens Flash) and typos...Yeah too lazy to fix them in this version I'll make sure I won't make this much typos in episode 2!
You done your best but...
Next time you do it again, do a spelling check, there are a lot of mistakes in your words. For your first movie you've done a good job, but i think it can be a little better .And the music is still not working...
Yeah I think my next one will look a lot better ^^ Atleast so far it's better than the episode 1!
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overall, that was average. maybe I'm ebeing a little harsh just since i hate that dragonballs crap
use good spelling next time
You lost me at "Hello"
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Hmm well hahah xD
I'll try harder next time ^^
yawn
Last time I checked dbz was about martial arts and fighting. It was torture to have to sit through two sprites spitting word bubbles back and forth. If you refuse to add voices then at least cut the chat scene down quite significantly.