good effort, not bad result
your flash was good, a few typos, but hey who cares. ignore the guy before, he is obviously a wank. is a good effort, keep tryin, was entertaining. all dbz fans will enjoy this
Reviews for "DBZ The Last Resort 1"
Steevoo responds:
Hey thanks ^^
Needs work.
I'm hoping English is your second language because you sure did have a lot of spelling and grammar errors in it. So yeah, if you aren't to great at grammar and spelling and all that, have someone that is good at it look it over before you submit your other flashes. Next time, try to fix the music so the songs aren't all playing at once, you had all three of those songs playing at once! Other than that, you did a pretty good job at animating the sprites!
Steevoo responds:
Yeah I know about my english problem and yes it's secondary language. yeah I'll fix the music too this flash was made in a hurry anyway ^^
Uhm.......
Rather boring through the whole thing. The music clutered together and became a massive blur. Please try proofing your spelling aswell. Good try at it though.
Steevoo responds:
Yeah I'll fix em
all tens!!
Man I can't wait to see the next one!
Meh
It was good, but the music didn't ever stop and got mushed together. I heard them all at the same time a ultimately exited the flash. It kinda hurt my ears. lol. But I aleast got to the end, but like I said, I colsed it once I heard soldier side because it was so Bleh.
Steevoo responds:
Sorry xD I tried to fix the music stuff But I coudn't for some god damn reason but I know now how to xD