Reviews for .Aspiration. [Trance]

[LK412]

Heyy!

You have something here, you just need to work on it a bit more.

Mixing is an issue, just work on it a bit more, its pain i know but its necessary. I have the same problem :P.

It never really took off, it was the same throughout excluding the piano break (which i loved).

The melody was catchy, but it got a bit repetitive.

There were too many synths going on at once, they were all good, but when u mashed them up together it was messy.

I think all this song needs is some better structure, because it never really took off as i said. You should start slow and build it up to a climax.

A lot of potential, so keep working on it. I wouldn't work on this song more because it would probably hold you back, so start fresh and keep all the criticism you get in mind so you dont repeat the same mistakes and can grow as an artist.

Good luck in the future!

5/5 8/10 Keep it up :D!

b0b3rt responds:

Thanks for the review, ideas =)
I'm a fan =D

[ShadowsOfLight]

Errrr

You really lacked alot. A better intro... I didn't like the whistle type sound, and hte bg bass ... just could use so much more!

b0b3rt responds:

Thanks for the review >>><<<

[my-garbage]

I think there is something unknown here.

I don't think you know what original means from your response to g4ebguyGT review.

Not trying to be mean. I'm just saying. Not my type of music but it was decent. I don't vote so your score won't drop okay?

See yah

b0b3rt responds:

Original.. as in, it's not a remix or a remake of anything. There's a very limited number of chord progressions, so some are obviously going to get used multiple times.

[Trancecore]

Seven..

But it's:
GENERIC

Common, very Common Bassline

b0b3rt responds:

I know.

[Rawrthaas]

meh

I think Newgrounds has officially become over-saturated with generic basshunter style hands up songs. I don't even think people who keep spewing out these cloned basshunter songs even know the type of music they're making. They're all poorly EQ'd with lame transitions, the same exact chord progression, the same nexus presets.. what else can I say.. this song is not an exception.

b0b3rt responds:

Yeah, I've heard that before.
I'm still working on it.