good song
overall good. on the score i gave ya 5 because it sounded great. But and 8 here cause it's a bit repetition. but other then that good song. Just add a bit more spice in it and you'll be on your way. kudos anyway.
Reviews for ".Aspiration. [Trance]"
b0b3rt responds:
Alright, thanks.
Heyy!
You have something here, you just need to work on it a bit more.
Mixing is an issue, just work on it a bit more, its pain i know but its necessary. I have the same problem :P.
It never really took off, it was the same throughout excluding the piano break (which i loved).
The melody was catchy, but it got a bit repetitive.
There were too many synths going on at once, they were all good, but when u mashed them up together it was messy.
I think all this song needs is some better structure, because it never really took off as i said. You should start slow and build it up to a climax.
A lot of potential, so keep working on it. I wouldn't work on this song more because it would probably hold you back, so start fresh and keep all the criticism you get in mind so you dont repeat the same mistakes and can grow as an artist.
Good luck in the future!
5/5 8/10 Keep it up :D!
b0b3rt responds:
Thanks for the review, ideas =)
I'm a fan =D
Good, but room for improvement.
It was a good trance piece, but I felt it was too held back. Nothing big that distinguished itself from the rest. Which isn't necessarily bad.
Simply put, it is a 'safe' song. You just didn't really take enough risk with it.
b0b3rt responds:
You're right, it's pretty basic and it mostly was a test of Nexus and some stuff I had learned recently.
I'm working on a much better mix of this now.
Errrr
You really lacked alot. A better intro... I didn't like the whistle type sound, and hte bg bass ... just could use so much more!
b0b3rt responds:
Thanks for the review >>><<<
OAO!
Sick.
*dances*