Reviews for .Aspiration. [Trance]

[LK412]

Heyy!

You have something here, you just need to work on it a bit more.

Mixing is an issue, just work on it a bit more, its pain i know but its necessary. I have the same problem :P.

It never really took off, it was the same throughout excluding the piano break (which i loved).

The melody was catchy, but it got a bit repetitive.

There were too many synths going on at once, they were all good, but when u mashed them up together it was messy.

I think all this song needs is some better structure, because it never really took off as i said. You should start slow and build it up to a climax.

A lot of potential, so keep working on it. I wouldn't work on this song more because it would probably hold you back, so start fresh and keep all the criticism you get in mind so you dont repeat the same mistakes and can grow as an artist.

Good luck in the future!

5/5 8/10 Keep it up :D!

b0b3rt responds:

Thanks for the review, ideas =)
I'm a fan =D

[rivvion]

nice

more!!!

!

b0b3rt responds:

Heh there will be.

[scrungebob]

Good

See, I really liked this, the only way it could be too repetitive would be if it played over and over again. Repetition however, is simply apart of the genre though I do agree it could have been slightly better, maybe a tad faster.

b0b3rt responds:

Thanks.

[DragonsoulX]

good song

overall good. on the score i gave ya 5 because it sounded great. But and 8 here cause it's a bit repetition. but other then that good song. Just add a bit more spice in it and you'll be on your way. kudos anyway.

b0b3rt responds:

Alright, thanks.

[Kazmo]

Seems like you don't like criticism.

Too bad.

First off, this is dance not trance, primarily due to the kick and chord progression you have.

The intro, or shall I say lack of, is quite generic. I laughed when I read "Totally original trance piece."since it doesn't sound all that original.

Not going to lie, this song is extremely repetitive, and the lead that comes in at 34 seconds is way too high pitched, and it's definitely not a pleasing sawlead either.

1:50 is pretty much the nicest part of the whole song. Good job with the piano.

You also have some over-compression issues, which I'm sure is due to the lack of effort and time put into this piece. (2 days for the framework...point proven)

Nonetheless, it sounds okay, but it's not excited or new.

"TOP 5?! WOOOAH" I'm just as shocked as you are...

b0b3rt responds:

Actually, Kazmo, I love criticism. Unfortunately, most people, unlike you, don't actually tell me what's wrong and should be fixed.
I'll keep working on this piece, and I'll take your suggestions into account in the future.