Seems like you don't like criticism.
Too bad.
First off, this is dance not trance, primarily due to the kick and chord progression you have.
The intro, or shall I say lack of, is quite generic. I laughed when I read "Totally original trance piece."since it doesn't sound all that original.
Not going to lie, this song is extremely repetitive, and the lead that comes in at 34 seconds is way too high pitched, and it's definitely not a pleasing sawlead either.
1:50 is pretty much the nicest part of the whole song. Good job with the piano.
You also have some over-compression issues, which I'm sure is due to the lack of effort and time put into this piece. (2 days for the framework...point proven)
Nonetheless, it sounds okay, but it's not excited or new.
"TOP 5?! WOOOAH" I'm just as shocked as you are...