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Reviews for ".Aspiration. [Trance]"

amazing music

this is a nice song i like the fluidness of the music/intraments good work

b0b3rt responds:

Thanks =)

Totally amazing!

It's rare for any tune to impress me enough to earn a 5! This is just sheer brilliance, a brilliant job! Although the ending is quite abrupt (perhaps try to fade it out in future?); it's still by far one of the best things I've heard in ages!

b0b3rt responds:

Thanks =)

listen to this

almost all songs on the radio sound the same now all the beyonces and the rihanas and all the hip hop R&B soundsthe same just drumbs and clap, but there will always be one thats better than most. i have to say this song is quite sterotypicaly techno stuff with the progression and melody and what not, but it still doesnt sound bad and is a good listen. doesnt all Mozart sound like mozart? your a little harsh for giving this song anything less than a seven, but then again it is your opinion. Good song yo i DL it

b0b3rt responds:

Thanks.

LISTEN

THIS IS NOT TRANCE. IT'S DANCE. CHANGE IT. arrrg. Yeah. If you really want to know what trance is go look up Above and Beyond dude.

Cons
1) this is not an original dance piece. tons of people used this chord progression so stop using it.
2) tons of people have made this melody
3) tons of people use nexus presets or sytrus presets so start trying to make your own sounds
4) your bass is boring, try and be more creative
5) use better percussion, those sounds are very recognizable. also have crashes or reverse crashes, there were none which made this song worse
6) the ending was horrible, didn't even fit with the whole song
7) use more automation
8) your song uses too much compression. take off fl limiter on your master channel.
9) work on your arrangement structure, it's all over the place
10) use a lot more time on making tracks, and we don't care how long you worked on a song. take the time to make it sound good.

Goods
1) kinda catchy.

well there you go, that's me being honest.

PS. for those of you who hate people that criticize songs than why don't you pack up your 2 minute attention span brain and go away . we are actually being honest. -

--- keep it up.

b0b3rt responds:

I've been told all this before.. you would have known that if you'd bothered to read the other reviews.

woah

automatically top of my favourites. about infinity outta 10 man.

b0b3rt responds:

Thanks =)