Dude, are you joking?
If you said this was bad, you must be joking DJOrsa i do not like you this song is great except for the end.
Reviews for ".Aspiration. [Trance]"
b0b3rt responds:
Lol thanks, next mix won't end on a piano.
First of all.
I hear a lot of stock Nexus samples.. :p
They are good to use, but if you are going to sample, at least change them to what -you- want them to sound like.
The lead is far too loud over the bass. The kick gets drowned out when it comes in.. and the melodies aren't very rhythmic or melodically challenging. ><
Structure is almost absent, and the piano in the end comes in randomly as the lead that was playing the whole song disappears in less than 5 seconds.
Need to work on EQ, melodies, layering, and build-up/structure.
Sorry if I sound harsh, but I'm trying to help.. it's not bad for one of your first songs. :D
Orsa
P.S. Also, this isn't trance. It's more of dance/hands up! xD
b0b3rt responds:
Thanks for the review (and criticisms) but Kazmo already mention most of what you touched on, and I realize I shouldn't end on a piano in a trance song >.<
Working on a much better mix of this song now, got FL Filter working nicely =p
TyT
woah man 2 minutes sounded like i dunno, 5? felt like it anyway, good song brah
b0b3rt responds:
Thanks.
Awsome
I loved it but i wish it was longer
b0b3rt responds:
Thanks, I'm working on a club mix of this now =O
holy shit
this is some great sutff man your really good at this and you werent lieing about a totally orignial tance never hread anything like in my life and ever secne i was 12 iv been looking a trance and techno song and this one is top of my list of over 9000 song iv listoned to great job
b0b3rt responds:
Hehe thanks =)