Horrendous
Mediocre graphics (terrible at times) and horrible writing. I'm sure you were sitting at home stoned, watching My Name Is Earl, and, feeling a bit mischievous and unoriginal, you decided to try and pull the same general concept off but with a "twist." You probably got the idea of changing the lottery ticket to a bottle cap just from thinking of the word "twist." That's not necessarily a bad thing; I'm just trying to put myself in your predictable shoes.
The storyline didn't really follow through and the flash ended rather abruptly. This flash may contain one of the worst excuses for an ending I've ever seen. "Ooo...soft." "Now that's ironic."... What? It's ironic that the shirt the trucker purchased was soft? Or that an angel administered some guy's second death? It seems like you just couldn't come up with anything, so you killed the main character off. And it's so fucking trite and cheesy to end a movie with "Now that's ironic." What happened to the guy, by the way...shouldn't he have ended up back in front of that gay angel's desk?
Overall, I found this flash to be very incoherent, irresolute, and awkwardly childish. You should get someone to help you write...and draw. The sound was all right, but that made no difference in my opinion of the film.