dry humor
your delivery time for the punchline was apualing
Reviews for "Twist of Fate"
JeremyLokken responds:
But it was sent...
...first class?
this looked like a really good flash
but it wasnt, it started out good but had a terrible ending, it was just stupid, it could have been done better
Irony??
lol, do you know what irony means?
Both of those cases in the flash had nothing to do with irony.
Otherwise, decent flash.
Not too bad but room for improvement
Graphics wern't poor but could do with some work and the sound could too.
And none of that was actually ironic. Unfortunate and ironic are two different things dammit!
eh...
Don't really see why this is on the front page. It was only middle of the road. The graphics were fine and the sound/voiceacting was above-average. It's just the joke was flat. Like...real flat. Flatter than the guy under the truck. A bit more proofreading and it would've been great. Don't rush on your next project and maybe you'll get something funnier.