pretty cool
fun to watch....it seemed like a lightshow
pretty cool
fun to watch....it seemed like a lightshow
thanks, A light show, hmm cool.
nice
sounds good, color is good, not glitchy, nice job.
Thanks for the compliments.
The sounds are just fine
But why that sudden ending? Still, it was a decent flash, keep up teh good work!
Alot of people are asking about the sudden ending. I ended it because I thought it was getting repetative.
Needs work
I protected this, but when it gets through, I think you should edit some things, or at least improve in a 3rd part:
- The sound is indeed crappy. Way too much bass, it sounds very hollow and distorted. I think the whole thing might need a different song, without vocals. This takes away the focus and besides, I fucking hate it :)
- The screen is blank several times, that really slows things down. Link the parts together and maybe have more "line evolutions" going on at the same time, that would really increase the replayability. Work to a climax of some kind. Way more than this will not be too much.
Good luck!
Why do you hate the song? Oh well, thanks for the reveiw. I left some parts blank so it wouldn't get so repetative, which I failed at.
wow not bad
It looks like you really have your effects down. the explosion-type parts were excellent! i hope to see more, this is very promising :] 3 out of 5
Thanks for the reveiw.