Better
I know you said the first one was better, but I disagree, I definitely like this one better. Even though you used a lot of the same things from the first one, you still added enough new elements to make it fun to watch. The animations and transitions into different elements was very smooth. The explosions and fire were very well drawn. Liked the music, but once again, I feel that in FBF movies, there needs to be syncing. Nice job though.
hey, thanks for another reveiw! I am prety bad at synching, but if I make another movie, I will try to sync the sound. if I do make another movie it won't be this kind of movie. it might be frame by frame, by I am trying to use actual figures.
Well done
The songs you use for your series are absolutely flawless!
But on the other side of the scale this wasnt much different from your first one, it had its parts but not the same overall effect.
Perhaps if you continue with FBF you may want to add like a "wormhole" background so its kinda like the line actually goes somewhere in a 3D world. Not understand?
Like the background could be the view of a passenger on a rollercoaster looking forward at the tracks from the front seat.
That way the audience is not only looking at the FBF lines but also looking PAST the lines to give it a kind of illusion.
Not a rollercoaster literally but I used that as an example of what the audiences view of the background would be.
Thanks again for reveiwing my movie! I know, its getting very repetative. At the time when i made these I wasn't very knowledgable in the ways of flash, so I didn't know much except simple animations. Uh oh, I bet you saw my third one as well. Its much worse then the first two.
Still Good
I did like this better than the first. Your FBF skills are definately good.
I would, like I said the first time, recommend something other than FBF. You seem to have the capabilities for more, and would like to see what you can do with a different style of flash animation.
Thanks for the submit!
As I gave quite a long response to the last reveiw, I will shorten this one out a bit. What would you suggest I do? It seems like there is no longer any originality on newgrounds, and I am not saying mine is original either. Glad you liked it, I bet you will like the third one less though.
Excellent and creative
Great job, Graham! That's awesome! Music ended kinda suddenly, but what can you do about that? See you in intro to lit.
Unless we have a snow day, hehe. Cya dylan, and thanks for watching my movies
that was cool
i reviewed your last fun with lines and said "that was the craziest thing ive ever seen". i take that back this 1 is crazier lol. can't wait for number 3 (please make it).
Thanks for reveiwing and watching both of them. Quote: can't wait for number 3 (please make it).
I would really like to, but it would be too repetative. The concept portrayed in my movies gets boring after a while I would think. Im working ona different style right now.
Thanks for the reveiw!