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You should name your flash titles "fun with lines #" so people know what they are going to get. I liked this i mean there is a limit to the creativity you can have with lines but you havent found it yet, and while keeping the background music fresh and different has kept this series tight. Overall another entertaining entrance in your series.
~HJ~
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)
Another cool FBF
~The good~
The FBF was pretty nice, some cool effacts in this made it very pleasuurable for the eyes. The music was also upbeat and catchy, and the linees moved with the music during most parts.
~The bad~
A lot of the same problems that occured in the otther one I reviewed, it ends way too suddenly and the backgrounds are pretty dull. You almostt finishedd the song, you should've just let it go for a little bit and just finish it. Another major problem I found was that if you pressed the REPLAY button, it would just lead you to a green screen that doesn't load for quite a long time.
Overall, a decent FBF, can't say it was one of your best, but it was still pretty darn good. I hope this review was helpful!
3/5
Review Request Club
Quite good
This flash was a little better than the first one. Again, lots of lines, but that's what I usually see on a FBF flash anyway. Still, there were drawings of several things that were good. Nice animation in this flash as well with the FBF animation. :) The sound, the music didn't me too much, but at least the music was at a reasonable quality to give the filesize of the flash quite big, but not too big. Nice work.
-Bahamut
Thanks again for the reveiw, I'm glad it interested you in some parts. My last 10 reveiws have all been from elite guard members, hehe, except the one from ramagi. The third one isn't as good though.
holy shit
i didn't expect that! i press play and what happens, i get the shit scared out of me by sudden music and words. :P don't know why. anyways, it kinda came to an abrupt stop. but it's not that big of a deal. you're doing better on this one. more lines, better sound quality. it's looking good so far. good job.
it scared you? Lol. , I wasn't intending it to be a shock flash or anything. I think this one is the best of the three. The third one is very repetative.
Now this is what I was talking about
Funny I read what you said, but I think you did improve with this submission.
Well you included more lines with this one which is good, and you actualyl created things with them that did various things, which made it more interesting.
I know you said the replay button doesn't work you could fix it. :)
I think you could do a good FBF.
You made some good improvements with this.
Thanks for the reveiw. I thought that I should include more so it wouldn't get so repetative. If you are going to see my third one, be warned, its pretty repetative of the first two, and alot of people are saying its the worst. Thanks for the compliments.