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Reviews for "perhaps its fun..."

Ok

good, but way to long.
Otherwise said, not enough variation.

Legend responds:

gotcha.

pretty cool

fun to watch....it seemed like a lightshow

Legend responds:

thanks, A light show, hmm cool.

I thought it was alright

It was alright. But sadly, line movies... they are done far too much! No offence! some are good. Yours in particular was. YOu probably should have done a better job finishing the movie. Seeing as how it ends in the MIDDLE of the song. I gave you a good score, and I hope that you get onto the portal. Good luck Mooney Mccracken

Legend responds:

thanks, Once my speakers get fixed ill see what you mean about ending abruptly

Well done

The songs you use for your series are absolutely flawless!

But on the other side of the scale this wasnt much different from your first one, it had its parts but not the same overall effect.

Perhaps if you continue with FBF you may want to add like a "wormhole" background so its kinda like the line actually goes somewhere in a 3D world. Not understand?

Like the background could be the view of a passenger on a rollercoaster looking forward at the tracks from the front seat.
That way the audience is not only looking at the FBF lines but also looking PAST the lines to give it a kind of illusion.

Not a rollercoaster literally but I used that as an example of what the audiences view of the background would be.

Legend responds:

Thanks again for reveiwing my movie! I know, its getting very repetative. At the time when i made these I wasn't very knowledgable in the ways of flash, so I didn't know much except simple animations. Uh oh, I bet you saw my third one as well. Its much worse then the first two.

Nice Job

<Good Points>
The animation was okay, graphics were good, good song, it was long, some violence, and the house blowing up made me laugh.

<Improvement>
The animation could be so much faster. It was pretty slow in some parts. Also the replay button doesn't work.

4/5 homer8722