Not a bad flash...
A sad story.
It was a bit short and simply (in terms of story) but i think it's an ok flash.
Reviews for "Revenge : Not So Sweet?"
Warrickneff responds:
Thanks, believe it or not, it was about 1/2 that length on the first submission :(
Good for the most part
I liked it. The graphics could be worked on some and the scribbles of writing at the beginning hurt my eyes, but for the most part it was good. Keep at it, its not bad just needs to be worked on. *i'm starting on my flash skills this summer, my friend/newgrounds are going to help me make a few subissions.
Warrickneff responds:
Thanks! It took me a few months to get this far so when you get started keep at it!
You know.. I liked it.
Simple idea.. well executed. At first I didn't like the shock of the gunshot... but after a second I thought it made it more real. I wouldn't change it.. but that's just my opinion.
Good work.. keep it up.
Warrickneff responds:
Thanks for review! I'll keep that in mind because I'm getting different opinions about whether the shock of gunshot was good or not!
good job....
..was this your first flash? if so it is very good especially considering it's file size. good job. ^.^
Not too bad...
This isn't a bad flash at all, but there are some things that you should work on. The characters were nicely done, but I think you need to work on the animations a bit (i.e., when they're walking, stepping out of a car, etc...). The story was good, but maybe add some more to it; like what happened before that would cause him to be so upset with her. It is a good story, but maybe show the viewer the reason behind the character's decision for the outcome. You've definitely got a talent for this, just keep working on it and soon you'll have some fine work. Good job overall, keep working on it to improve your skills.
Warrickneff responds:
Thanks! A great review, I'll try to keep that in mind as I make more flashes!