Homie W, Hows it hangin'
10's across the board for my flash homie. You got me into this site now, geesh there's a lot of people. The movies good man, make some more!
Reviews for "Revenge : Not So Sweet?"
Warrickneff responds:
So many people I only know 1 now...you.
But yeah, I'm hoping to get flash back up and running cause I haven't even touched it after submitting this...Check out my review!
A little sweet
i think your fucked up.
I Liked it ALOT!
I think you did very good in this animation. You have my good vote!
Warrickneff responds:
Thx, I actually tried hard!
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thats sad cute sweet
2 true
meaningful
Strengths: you have an inventive style going for you in this submission - i liked the whole eyelid openin' & closin'.. what would of made it scarier if it was a 1st person view of the main character holdin' the gun & comitting the crime.. perhaps adding a bit of half-detailed violence.. can never get too much of that heh!1 The drawings are pretty good.. as well as the sequences of events; well thought out - perhaps the author is reflecting a personal experience? You got the music right & spot on... contributed to a sad/grieving setting.. lastly, you did well to dim the brightness in the scene where her Ex gets out of the vehicle, & the last scene gave the viewers something to think about.
weaknesses: this submission was simple & straight to the point.. but if you were to make changes it would be the detail of the drawings - but it's pretty good how it's simple - nice & meaningful flash you have here :-)
- HighDef.
Warrickneff responds:
First, thanks for the really good review! It helps when people honestly point out faults or weaknesses so I can improve upon them! I'm finding the music held the flash together, and that the different views also add alot to flashes!
It's all a new experience for me, and I'm hoping to make a couple more!