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Reviews for "Revenge : Not So Sweet?"
sad
thats so sad im goin to give u a 5 on the rating
Warrickneff responds:
Thank you!
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your skill improved alot :-), and me liked your flash but some of the movements (like the car) didn't look real, so there are still some ways to get better. Me bets the next one will get a green, if you work on your skills.
Warrickneff responds:
Thanks for review! Its encouraging to know that there might be hope for my skills!
Not Too Shabby
It was short and simple, but I liked it. It wasn't too bad at all.
Not too bad...
This isn't a bad flash at all, but there are some things that you should work on. The characters were nicely done, but I think you need to work on the animations a bit (i.e., when they're walking, stepping out of a car, etc...). The story was good, but maybe add some more to it; like what happened before that would cause him to be so upset with her. It is a good story, but maybe show the viewer the reason behind the character's decision for the outcome. You've definitely got a talent for this, just keep working on it and soon you'll have some fine work. Good job overall, keep working on it to improve your skills.
Warrickneff responds:
Thanks! A great review, I'll try to keep that in mind as I make more flashes!