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your skill improved alot :-), and me liked your flash but some of the movements (like the car) didn't look real, so there are still some ways to get better. Me bets the next one will get a green, if you work on your skills.
Reviews for "Revenge : Not So Sweet?"
Warrickneff responds:
Thanks for review! Its encouraging to know that there might be hope for my skills!
Not too shabby
For a person just getting used to making these, you did a very good job. The story was pretty understandable, and it was overall good, so u get a 8, Good job!
Not bad at all
I think this was pretty good.But i want to know what insipred you to do this animation. please respond.
But all you really need to work on is graphics and more attention to detail like when he walks and stuff, you know.Anyays overall very good. I can see you have some raw talent so keep trying. and please respond back i still wanna know what insipired you to make this.
Warrickneff responds:
What inspired me? I guess I was feeling down and I started to draw something that would make me sad. I stopped multiple times over the weeks as I was making this and changed things, but it is still weird to watch because the flash doesn't seem like something I would do. It may not seem like it but the flash was just random thoughts put together in a story.
Good
The sound got a little annoying. I think you should town down the volume of that first shot sound, it was to loud when everything else was quiet and made me jump in my seat.
Good first flash
Warrickneff responds:
Thx for review...I thought about changing the sound after I submitted it, because I realized other people might not expect the shot, and turn up their speakers to hear the quiet music.
Moving
Very good work. Graphics could use a little work but hey everyones a critic. The sound and match up with the story is what made me. I would like to know what song you used or if it was originall. Please send some info back. ~J
Warrickneff responds:
The song is by Thomas Newman - White Oleander. He does a lot of soundtracks for movies...like Meet Joe Black, American Beauty, and now that I look through amazon.com, a ton of other great movies.
It's in the movie White Oleander...not sure if you've seen it but it was released in Canada about 8(?) months ago.
If you listen to the song without the video, you'll see that it would be almost impossible to do a bad cut of it because of how good a song it is.