eh...
It has potential, but the music got irritatingly repetitive rather quickly and the scrolling text was both hard to read and would have kept me from seeing any background animation (which I hope to see in subsequent chapters). The graphics were good though, and like I said before, it has definite potential
What is your damage?!
What makes you think I want a MOVIE, to be words scrolling up my screen. Three months?! THis could have taken you two hours had you put some effort into it. Don't waste our time. So fucking pointless.
Um......
I hope your planning to add chapters on to this...... the drawings looked pretty awesome and I hope you make an animation. The text was a liitle hard to read with the centaur thing in the background. Oh....... and why did it take you THREE MONTHS to make this?!?!? There's no animation, just text...... well w/e....
~AceSpyderz
I see no reason for this.
Sorry, but I come to newgrounds to view animations and games, not reading long scrolls of text. Maybe if this was in a book form it'd be decent, but it's just boring to sit in front of your computer and read a story that you've come up with. Also, change the font style and color as it's hard to read and when the text on the right side is overlapping the minotaur thing it's impossible to see. Maybe if this was animated or someone actually spoke what you've written it would be more well-received.
Would have been nice....
if something happened. I'm sorry, but it was a bunch or words. A story written out. That would have been ok if maybe you had different background pics, even if they were stills it would have been better than the same thing. The thing that would have improved on this the most is the writing. It was nice to look at, but very difficult to read. I think if you want to continue this, it should at least be readable and then you should add some type of animation. Even if it is just some "wipes" or "fades" to a different picture.