ms paint at its finest
on the right track. it looked pretty cool and all, but that animation was atrocious. have a friend do it or take a little more time on it. some of it was just a joke.
Reviews for "s.i.n::seed hunter ep [1]"
Meh.. 4/5.
I come back from a long period of no internet to see this. It sent a chill down my spine but that was about it..
Graphics - 9/10. Definitely well drawn but not the best I've seen.
Style - 10/10. The story is interesting thus far, and makes me want to see the next episdoe.
Sound - 5/10. Good music but no voices! It kind of sucks to have to tear your eyes down to see what they're saying, you know?
Violence - 10/10 Blood and gore. Need I say moe?
Interactivity - 1/10. Play button, that was about it.
Humor - 0/10. ...Must I say something about it? <.<;
Overall a 7. I would give 9 but it seems that spelling is a problem here. I'm not a perfectionist but it kinda irks me to see such a good flash have so many typos..
Great work, can't wait to see more.
Lacks original characters
I like WHR, and Amon was my favorite character, but it looks like you just colored in a picture of him with white hair, the guys jacket was exactly the same as in the anime... however, the animation was great, and I think voices would have killed it so good choice there. The story seemed cool overall and I hope to see the next installment soon.
You said you want feedback.
There are a ton of issues in this flash to address but first I want to say that it's nice to see someone putting forth a lot of time and effort into something they enjoy. You have the drive, and potential and to expand on that, you have to practice on your anatomy and study from life. Not from anime.
Create anime style all you want, I'm just saying that the fact that you've only drawn anime all your life shows big time. You don't feel the 3 dimensions of the characters because you can't see the characteristics of light and shadow and how they form a character. Anime also tends to cause animators to have stiff motions rather than flowing motions because it's so analytical of exactly how people move. You have to learn how to exaggerate how you work. Draw from life often for study and fall back on anime for fun. Animate a character in a really exaggerated motion with strong poses and silhouette and the stiffer more regulated movements will become easier and notably stronger. Study different cloths for clothes. Leather, bedsheets, t-shirts, how do they react to certain movements and pressure points. All you have to do to improve is observe life around you and practice. Great effort, you have lots of potential and determination.
ok??
it NEEDS sound
make it more fluid