Good First Epsiode
I like how you left off at a suspenseful moment and I leave me wanting to see more.
I enjoyed your graphics. Yet I felt that it was a bit choppy and jumpy and that there was no real fluidity in the motion of the characters or other moving objects. If you increased, the number of picture/frames in between it would help to resolve this.
I also would like to hear voices for the characters. The subtitles are good but you just do not get the emotion that you would get from having dialogue.
Hope this is helpful and cannot wait to see more :)