Not bad
Not bad, I hope you're gonna make a 2nd episode cause it's quite promising, if you do, I hope it's a bit longer. WEll keep it up
Reviews for "Gandalf's 'Adventures'"
green-lotus responds:
Cool, a 2nd episode! Now that is a freaky idea. BUT a do-able one. THanks for the good review!
Clever enough
Although it came out alittle rushed, I enjoyed it until the end. Definately next time make your submission abit longer. There was alot of potential in your idea, make sure that you use all of that potential instead of wanting a finished product. Otherwise, I liked it alot.
green-lotus responds:
yes, i admit it WAS a little rushed but I am still pretty pleased with what I came out with in the end. Thank you for the good comments!
Nice work
Your 13 and you can make this stuff, thats insanely awesome. I wish I knew how to work Flash a little better. This is really well done and I can't wait to see some of your work as you progress! Good luck!!
green-lotus responds:
COOL 'INSANELY AWESOME!'. YOU ROCK MAN!
Trust me I will keep doing flash for ever and ever, it is like my soulmate...on..a computer..? Anyway thank you!
Impressive animating skill.
If you are indeed 13 years old, you have a great future in animation. Yet you must work on your story telling. It lacked severely and good artwork alone can not save a piece. Also, sound is the MOST important part of any short film or animation, work on your sound design and you shall be grand.
green-lotus responds:
Yup, I'm 13, and I am greatly pleased that you think I have a good future (as do i :P). So now on I must work harder, especially on sound, and story!
boah boah
well what can i say it was reeeaaal good actually aspecially for ur age maby u can add some special effects to it like when frodo falls on the road maby a loud bang or something and the ending was rather wierd but anyways keep up the great work =)
green-lotus responds:
Thanks!! Ill try and add more sound next time...and when I say next time I mean pretty soon...