pretty good kid
that was really good. better than anything ive tryed to do, course... i havent tried much haha.
Reviews for "Gandalf's 'Adventures'"
green-lotus responds:
Just keep trying and you could do better!
Easily. compared to what I can do hehehe.
Very good
Your artstyle put you over the top here. Well done.
green-lotus responds:
Cool. Art carried me through what is needed. Thanks!
Nice job all in all
That was very well done. Looks like you put a lot of effort into it, so nice work. Keep it up.
green-lotus responds:
Thanks. And, yes, I did put a lot of effort into it and I think it payed off.
funny
Very nice. Makes me think twice about taking on a Hobbit.
green-lotus responds:
They is vicious little blighters...with sharp teeth!
It has potential...
Good work for your age. I do hope you’ll continue to develop and polish your style.
It moved well at the beginning, even though most of the plot was taken from the action of the first movie. Try creating your own ‘adventures,’ rather than taking them from the movie or the book.
The ending was rushed and didn’t really make much sense.
Overall, practice developing your own plot. Your animations are decent, but they need a good story to compliment them.
As for the music, it would have worked better if you changed it to suit the action. Just sticking a piece from the movie soundtrack and letting it play really doesn’t work.
All the same, nice effort. Keep it up! ;)
green-lotus responds:
I appreciate this review very much for it goes into detail about what I have done correctly and falsely. Anything that you have pointed out I shall review upon my self and change to the standards they need to be. Thank you deeply for the well hotught out review.