Pretty Average
Nice Graphics, Well presentated. But needed more of a storyline to it and could of done with some humour!
Reviews for "Gandalf's 'Adventures'"
green-lotus responds:
OKie doke. Better storyline and more of the funny! Thanks man, I'll try and get better at them.
very nice
nice job on the art work i couldn't hear what Gandalf was saying tho
green-lotus responds:
Thank you! Myabe i should change the submission and increase the volume of the voices. Cheers for the advice. :P
Nice work
Your 13 and you can make this stuff, thats insanely awesome. I wish I knew how to work Flash a little better. This is really well done and I can't wait to see some of your work as you progress! Good luck!!
green-lotus responds:
COOL 'INSANELY AWESOME!'. YOU ROCK MAN!
Trust me I will keep doing flash for ever and ever, it is like my soulmate...on..a computer..? Anyway thank you!
Clever enough
Although it came out alittle rushed, I enjoyed it until the end. Definately next time make your submission abit longer. There was alot of potential in your idea, make sure that you use all of that potential instead of wanting a finished product. Otherwise, I liked it alot.
green-lotus responds:
yes, i admit it WAS a little rushed but I am still pretty pleased with what I came out with in the end. Thank you for the good comments!
Not bad
Not bad, I hope you're gonna make a 2nd episode cause it's quite promising, if you do, I hope it's a bit longer. WEll keep it up
green-lotus responds:
Cool, a 2nd episode! Now that is a freaky idea. BUT a do-able one. THanks for the good review!