Reviews for Gandalf's 'Adventures'

[alexsmolik]

Pretty good !

I really liked the opening scene, the one where Frodo is reading under the tree. The background is truly beautiful, even though you should've added more MovieClips to make it more alive, but hey, it's fine the way it is, I'm just being a pain in the ass, because after all, I'm here to review your movie to help you get better !

So there you go, the graphics were pretty good. The animation too. The music was a nice tune, but I thought it didn't play loud enough, but that's not much of a problem.

Pretty good movie in overal, even though it's kinda short.
Keep up the good work !
ALEX

green-lotus responds:

GOD that great!! Im honoured that someone so amazing at animating gave me a good review. That just made my day! Thanks, and I'll try and improve as many as as possible :P

[skotsoad]

great job!

yeah great job especially considering your only 13, great drawings and nice animation but yeah the end did seem a little rushed. Try not to rush cartoons no matter how annoying and long they take to finish.

green-lotus responds:

Thank you very much! I shall clear this up for any one who is unsure of my age, although you do believe me.
I AM 13 YEARS OF AGE.
Thank you also for the critisism.

[Sicaria]

Frodo's angry?

lol! This was too cute! And I agree, at 13 years old, you're quite the talented person! Rushing can be a problem, so try a nnd slow things down a bit- even if Gandalf was in a hurry ^_^

green-lotus responds:

Thankies for da cuteness! I shall not rush my projects anymore, and focus on making it brilliant!

[Meebs]

???

Amazing grpahics and stle, but i couldn't hear any sound. hmmm...,
did i mention GREAT GRAPHICS!

green-lotus responds:

Yay graphics!!! I could get a B on my GCSE's ya know! That is pretty damn good for 13!

[Lampwick]

needs to be more original..

I really liked the animation style. One thing is that I dont see how it follows gandalf's adventure very much differently than in the movie. I would love to see more of his adventure's off on his own, if you've got the time to do so.

Thanks

green-lotus responds:

I have LOADS of time on my hands and most of it is filled up with flash.
So a better story line is what is needed and originality.